memo

The feedback from the memoir review helped me see another prospective on my writing. This has taught me that I need to slow down and spend more time putting my thoughts together. I need to start simply with brainstorming. I now come to realize that when I write my writing style is scattered. I need to reread thoroughly and adequately. It also has come to my knowledge that I tend to repeat myself. Unfortunately I was lacking dialogue. From speaking with my partner he had give me an idea. It consisted of putting more detail into my writing to make is sound more interesting. We both agreed that my paper was dual. I don’t want to lose my audience’s attention. I need to put more excitement into my paper. I think this exercise is a great idea put all because it allows me to have another prospective on my topic.